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it looks great as it is
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Canon EOS-1Ds Mark III 1/128 second F/7.1 85 mm 100 May 30, 2009, 4:20:08 PM Share
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Because of the lace the hand that is up is lost and really doesn't need to be there. While without it you may think that you'd have a lot of unused space, it would actually make her standout in the image.
Her face, eyes and lips are all bright and beautiful. If I may touch on the make-up, the beauty spot above her lip should have been darkened and the spots on her neck could have a little make-up to diminish them. Not to discourage the MUA, cause everything else they did is fantastic for this image, the lips, brow, lashes and face are great.
All of this is of course simply my humble opinion.
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