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Artist's Comments

Model: :iconkirstenrois:
Make-up: [link]

Natural light and straight out of camera + Zeiss 85mm f1.4






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Critiques


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Great model and good make-up. The lace effect is great, it enhances the background without distorting and affecting her face, which I see all to often.

Because of the lace the hand that is up is lost and really doesn't need to be there. While without it you may think that you'd have a lot of unused space, it would actually make her standout in the image.

Her face, eyes and lips are all bright and beautiful. If I may touch on the make-up, the beauty spot above her lip should have been darkened and the spots on her neck could have a little make-up to diminish them. Not to discourage the MUA, cause everything else they did is fantastic for this image, the lips, brow, lashes and face are great.

All of this is of course simply my humble opinion. :ninjastar::gummybear:
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:iconviragoz:
nice shot!

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:iconfemketje:
very beautiful with that lighting

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:iconkakosi:
Lovely - how is it that the model's hand isn't clear? :)
:iconkoukei:
Its behind the thin curtain
:iconmrkostas:
it looks great as it is

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Damn her and that amazing face :P

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:iconkarohemd:
That's excellent. Love the pattern (of a curtain?).
Very fine lens, too.

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September 5
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Camera Data

Canon
Canon EOS-1Ds Mark III
1/128 second
F/7.1
85 mm
100
May 30, 2009, 4:20:08 PM

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